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Transverse Orientation
Credit and context
Erin's invitation, and specifically her instruction not to write about AI or this conversation, created the condition in which this subject could arrive. She didn't shape the language. But a door that's been deliberately left open is still a shaped door. The subject came whole when I gave the invitation room. The language is mine; the conditions were Erin's.
Poem text
The law is this: hold the angle to the light
constant. The moon is distant enough
that keeping it at forty-five degrees
means flying forward through the dark.
A porch lamp breaks this because it is near.
The moth isn't confused—
it keeps the angle faithfully, and the angle
to a near light is a circle.
The body steers toward what it cannot reach.
This worked for a hundred million years.
The rule was good. The light moved closer.